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The Inuit and Aleut don't really have
twenty-seven different words for "snow" and "ice,"
but for the purposes of this poem
they might as well.

We might also add that Anglo-Saxons and
other Germanic Norse tribes of the Dark Ages
had fifty-four words for "vagina,"
including the very poetic "maidenhead"
and "whispering eye."

Ancient Mandarin, nineteen characters for "sword,"
but forty-three for "rice"--
not counting the fifteen spoken words
to discriminate cooked from raw, steamed from fried
from sticky-ball, wild from domestic.

Pre-Unification Hawaiians had only one word for "pineapple,"
but Kamehameha VII's (also called Kamehameha, the Feeble)
magnum opus was to regulate
a usage dictionary for the inflections
en vogue among his people, including:
"paí-NÄ-pō" for generic,
"pine-ĦÆ-pōL" for the imperative,
"PÂI-na-po," diminutive,
"¿pai-nä-ppel," interrogative,
and "P¥-ÑĄ-POLE," the expletive.

For all this, there is no word in English
of any variety, any dialect
of the Mother-tongue of a new era
(a language which adds "sushi" and "adios"
to its dictionaries),
not one word that approximates
the feeling of living in borrowed skin,
epiphanizing your ancestral and memetic inheritance
in a tidal pull of lunar clarity.
©2009-2010 ~batousaijin
:iconbatousaijin:

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written during lunch break, because poetry can help you de-stress from a hard day of call center customer care.

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:iconthelemaj:
Whispering eye, huh? That's something.

Also, I much enjoyed the ending.

--
Truth be told,
I'd rather be sold
than juggle stepping stones.
:iconbatousaijin:
thanks :)

--
Vous n'êtes pas du tout semblables à ma rose, vous n'êtes rien encore, leur dit-il.
Le Petit Prince, Antoine de Saint Exupéry
:iconskycladgypsy:
:clap:

*and "P¥-ÑĄ-POLE," the expletive

brings a smile when read in the A.M. with coffee..

--
~La Belle Dame sans Merci~

...hope in but a grain of sand, is still hope.
I hold it safe within my hands;
With you, I'd like to share...
:iconbatousaijin:
hopefully after you wake up too?

--
Vous n'êtes pas du tout semblables à ma rose, vous n'êtes rien encore, leur dit-il.
Le Petit Prince, Antoine de Saint Exupéry
:iconskycladgypsy:
I'm betting towards a yes... :D

--
~La Belle Dame sans Merci~

...hope in but a grain of sand, is still hope.
I hold it safe within my hands;
With you, I'd like to share...
:icontruce-kage:
I really liked the educated wit this poem had. It's a very refreshing piece amongst a sea of emo trash. Kudos!

--
"If pride gives us pause, my love, then perhaps we have lived long enough already."
~Malfurion Stormrage
:iconbatousaijin:
so it's part of that sea, is it? :lol: thanks for reading and commenting!

--
"So you pick up this picture, this two-dimensional image, and you say, 'That's me...' It takes a story that's actually a fiction to make you and the baby in the picture identical to create your identity."
--Waking Life
:icongedwaylem:
ah, as someone with linguistic interest, i really like this. i love how you've weaved it together. though for some reason the last line leaves me a little uncertain

--
"millions long for immortality who do not know what to do with themselves on a rainy sunday afternoon." -susan ertz
:iconbatousaijin:
Verskoon my! Dit met u Afrikaner? (i know, i know. sorry, i know nothing of the beautiful Afrikaans language :( )

whence the uncertainty? expound so that i may learn. :)

--
"So you pick up this picture, this two-dimensional image, and you say, 'That's me...' It takes a story that's actually a fiction to make you and the baby in the picture identical to create your identity."
--Waking Life

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